Georgia and Alfie’s Highwayman verse

We took Georgia and Alfie’s verse that we wrote yesterday and put it under the microscope of group writing. Here’s what the class came up with:

 

The Highwayman calmly strolls through the door

While the redcoats are drinking on the upper floor.

The Highwayman’s hoping he won’t be found

He unties Bess

His true love Bess

Two devoted shadows skulk out safe and sound.

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2 responses to “Georgia and Alfie’s Highwayman verse

  1. That is a really good piece of writing by Georgia and Alfie, then edited by us!

  2. Phoebelovesmonkeys

    It was amazing I can really picture that wonderful but short piece of writing in my head.

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