Fagin’s Den – Charlie’s writing inspired by Oliver Twist

Oliver stepped into the gloomy dark room and gave a slight cry but no one heard. He then saw an old gentleman (but you will find he is not a gentleman later) with a grey, long, hairy beard and five other boys in the room. He was very distracted by the glorious smell of sausages but Dodger dragged him away. He was looking round the room at the ragged wallpaper which was peeling away and the dirty washing line with dusty handkerchiefs hanging on it like Vampire bats having a harmless sleep. He could also see Fagin’s dirty clothes including his brown longish jacket.

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