Our shared Poetry writing today…….

Today in English we started to play with language. Here is what the class came up with:

Poetry

 Poetry is a picture of a Caribbean beach at sunset,

A man with a moustache and a bowler hat,

A creamy cupcake topped with a cherry,

A portal to happiness.

Poetry is a bus full of frogs in fancy hats,

A silver sparkly fish,

A massage in a comfy chair,

A yeti in a tutu.

If you want to write another verse of your own, or say what it is that you particularly enjoyed, please write something in the comments box.

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11 responses to “Our shared Poetry writing today…….

  1. Epic our first piece out.

  2. So cool our first poem

  3. Awesome poem mounts, my mum thinks the poem is cool!!

  4. yo its me i just love it!

  5. really cool i love it

  6. A epic poem by mounts

  7. i love the poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  8. So cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  9. Very good okay I have to agree but moneybury are still the BEST!!!!!! 🙂

  10. Why a yeti in a tutu a bit random!!!!! 🙂

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